| My heart is screaming My mind is celebrating. This divided self. | The power is out. I push, my body resists. I can go no further. |
| Morning or mourning The day that dawns brings new grief. First light, then shadow. | Must break the silence This empty space inside is Louder than a scream |
Source: Haiku Poetry By Tracy
3 comments:
Dear haiku poet
here is a comment: I love your haiku. I am a Canadian poet, who has briefly experimented with haiku - it's hard to write! your mind/heart split one is my favourite - maybe I'll post a haiku too, and we can compare. in the meantime, I have one poem, bug soup, up on my site.
keep writing! people will find you.
jenn
The second one has 6 syllables in the first line
whoops i mean 3rd line XD
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